I dash around the abandoned corridor hoping that he won’t find me. My mouth shut silent and my shimmery eyes suddenly stared into darkness. He kept mumbling his death-threatening words, “come out, I won’t hurt you, I just want to play!” I wiped the sweat off my forehead and my face started burning up. What will happen to me next? Will I die? I heard a man's voice reaching out to me. I blinked a couple times, just enough to snap back into reality. “Ahm get out the halloween store, we’re closing” Oops maybe I was over exaggerating…
wow your mouse cripms was good because you have a lot of paragraph in your cool writing good job wint i like how you have big words in your writing good job wint
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